DNF - Red The First by C.D. Verhoff

Red the First (Galatia #0.5) - C.D. Verhoff

I got this for KBR, but I have packed it in at 34% read.  I tried, but I cannot call it 'readable'.  The tenses, the structure... lacking.  Truly lacking.  The idea, great, but the product?  No, sorry.  Not my cup of tea.  If I had paid for this, I would be furious.  I cannot recommend it at all.