Review - The Survivor Chronicles- The Upheaval
Brimming with creativity and a few interesting characters... but lacked an antagonist... I get that the 'upheaval' was meant for that but it was all over the place... first it was an earthquake, then it was an odd eclipse, it caused animals to go nuts and dogs to take a flying leap off a cliff... then there was a tsunami, there was steam vents and lava... pick one or two and focus, please!
With a good editor, this could be polished up to a three or even four star rating... it has potential, but it got lost among the overflow of excessive teen angst, typos, and assorted grammatical woe.
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